Ouuuuuuuuut?

Subject: Ouuuuuuuuut? Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:45 pm

Name: Outairyu

Age: 13

Race: Humans

Background: From stress, he ran away from home and survived in the wild. (it's simple...but yeah...)

Rp Sample:

*as my stomach grumbles, I move my hand to it*

Damnit...I'm getting hungry...Time to hunt, then.

*I stand up and take the knife I had taken with me as I walk off*

*soon after, I encounter a deer*

Well hello, dinner.

*I sneak up at it and pounce, stabbing my dagger deep into it's leg and as it falls down, I slit it's throat, effectively killing it*

Sigh...sometimes I hate this senseless killing...but it's me or them...

*I drag off the corpse, back to my makeshift campsite*

(Edited, okay?)

Subject: Re: Ouuuuuuuuut? Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:46 pm

-__- redo it Denied for now

Subject: Re: Ouuuuuuuuut? Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:48 pm

Which part?

Subject: Re: Ouuuuuuuuut? Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:59 pm

Background and rp sample and if youre a human fix the age dude

Subject: Re: Ouuuuuuuuut? Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:02 pm

I did do the age in brackets, Pinky didn't do a background (unless you count 'boring life' as an acceptable one)and I don't see how my RP sample is worse than some others. I mean, I'll admit; for example, Kon's was extremely long and detailed but some people didn't even DO one; yet you approved all of them.

Subject: Re: Ouuuuuuuuut? Mon Apr 21, 2008 11:03 pm

Approved